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Brambleclaw - I am nothing like my father!

Brambleclaw *sees Tigerstar in dream

Brambleclaw- Sup' fammm


Basically Brambleclaw. So what do you guys think? Very dramatic, right? XD You should totally critique this as well. I'm trying to improve.

Also two uploads in a day?? Yep. We are in a mystical place.



What to look forward to - Art trades
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Before I say anything else, I'm going to say that this is one of your best drawings. The effects are gorgeous, as well as the vision. Great job!
There are just a few comments I'd like to make:
First, I think Brambleclaw was bigger than Hawkfrost, though that really has nothing to do with this drawing. XD Otherwise, I have to admit that Brambleclaw is perfect. I can't find anything wrong with him, except that you could have done a bit better on the eyes.
For Hawkfrost, he's also pretty good, except that his visible forepaw might be a little to small, and the way he's shifted [and not braced] should have him already fallen over. But I love the texture and design! I especially love how you made his eyes glow, and the red on his paws.
As for Tigerstar, he is my favorite of the three. While he may be significantly bigger than cats can be, I love his expression and his posture! My favorite part are the red lines, though. That was a good touch. The only thing I would do was make his left eye slightly bigger.
Concerning the background, I do think that, as I said before, there should be more depth to the water, and a bit more depth to the forest. I also would have added mist, but you have successfully captured a creepy feeling without it! I also adore how you made the water red, and kind of seem to glow.
This is amazing! ^^ Just add a signature and you'd be as good as the best artists on here!